"I awoke in a miserable place; a run-down nursing home near the docks in Piraeus on the outskirts of Athens."
Very, very nice. You hooked me right away, and a very satisfying ending. Great job.
Thanks for a brilliant story, David. An enticing structure: we are on tenterhooks right to the end.
Jenny
Hi David, well done on this story - there are a lot of loose ends in mythology that might hold many secrets. I'm looking forward to reading any others that you have in your bottom drawer. Henry
Very, very nice. You hooked me right away, and a very satisfying ending. Great job.
Thanks for a brilliant story, David. An enticing structure: we are on tenterhooks right to the end.
Jenny
Hi David, well done on this story - there are a lot of loose ends in mythology that might hold many secrets. I'm looking forward to reading any others that you have in your bottom drawer. Henry